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Write an email about your holiday

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I received your task from Google Classroom and would like to answer it through this email. In this email I wanted to tell you about my last vacation which was last year, 2020. In the summer of 2020, my family and I had a great vacation in Phu Quoc City for 5 days if I remember correctly. We went to local restaurants to enjoy some famous traditional food at this lovely place like herring salad, sentinel crab, bread soup and many fresh seafoods. All of them were tasty! I strongly recommend you to try them once. Furthermore, you should spend some time at the lovely Long beach which is one of the six most beautiful beaches in the world, voted by Forbes. I also tried kayaking with my brother for the first time, it was so exciting! That's all I want to tell you about my vacation. Hope you have a great Vietnam's Independence Day with your family!
I received your task from Google Classroom and would like to answer it through this email. In this email I wanted to
tell
you about my last vacation which was last year, 2020.

In the summer of 2020, my family and I had a great vacation in
Phu
Quoc
City for 5 days if I remember
correctly
. We went to local restaurants to enjoy
some
famous
traditional food at this lovely place like herring salad, sentinel crab, bread soup and
many
fresh seafoods. All of them were tasty! I
strongly
recommend you to try them once.
Furthermore
, you should spend
some
time at the lovely Long beach which is one of the six most
beautiful
beaches in the world, voted by Forbes. I
also
tried kayaking with my brother for the
first
time, it was
so
exciting! That's all I want to
tell
you about my vacation.

Hope you have a great Vietnam's Independence Day with your family!
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IELTS essay Write an email about your holiday

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
158 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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