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American society has come to confuse its wishes with reality

American society has come to confuse its wishes with reality Olq8y
January 28, 1986 the space shuttle Challenger exploded on launch, killing all seven astronauts aboard in the worst space disaster ever. This catastrophe was entirely preventable. Engineers knew, and warned, that the solid fuel booster rockets of the shuttle were not safe in cold weather, but senior managers dismissed these warnings and insisted on launch. At the subsequent inquiry the physicist Richard Feynman summarized the debacle with the statement “Nature cannot be fooled”. We have not learned that lesson. In more and more ways American society has come to confuse its wishes with reality, and to pretend that wished-for fictions are true. In most cases these fictions are well intentioned, just as we all wish the Challenger could have been launched safely, but good intentions do not make wishes come true. We ignore history, which shows that most airplane hijackers are Arab. Refusing to “ethnically profile” airline passengers, airport security paid little attention to obvious risks, with the result that more than five thousand Americans were murdered by terrorists. All because we deliberately refused to recognize the obvious. Most of our self-deception occurs in softer fields, where its consequences are less immediate and less obviously catastrophic, and where the ideological pressures to enshrine fantasy as reality are stronger. For example, two deaf people sued YMCAs for enormous sums of money after losing jobs as lifeguards on account of their deafness. We all wish the disabled could do everything other people can do, but they cannot. That is why they are called disabled. The deaf cannot hear a call “HELP! ”. Should people drown to maintain the lie that deaf people can do a lifeguard's job? We know how AIDS is transmitted: by promiscuous sexual activity, chiefly homosexual, and by abusers of intravenous drugs who share hypodermic needles. The human body was not designed for these activities, and lacks the immunological defenses to deal with their consequences. Except for a comparatively few cases transmitted by transfused blood and blood products or congenitally, the victims of AIDS knowingly and deliberately put themselves at risk. AIDS could be stopped by a program of contact tracing and quarantine, methods which successfully contained venereal and other communicable diseases in the pre-antibiotic era. Instead, public policy refuses to admit that AIDS is a consequence of behavior, a fact which everyone knows to be true, and pours a large fraction of our biomedical research effort into a search, so far unsuccessful, for a cure. Education is probably the field in which we deceive ourselves the most, because the damage only appears decades later. We pretend that all children learn at the same rate and in the same way. Every teacher and parent knows this to be untrue, and to deny it is folly. But deny it we do. We insist on teaching all children reading in the same manner, even though some learn well with “look-say” methods (also known as “whole language”) and others require phonics. We ignore differences in ability, and cram dull, average and bright students into the same classrooms, boring the bright and leaving the dull behind, or reducing the education of all to the level of the slowest. When we observe that, on average, boys are better at mathematics than girls we refuse to accept that nature made them that way (just as nature made boys taller, on average). Instead we pretend this is the result of prejudice and custom, and spend a great deal of effort trying to coax girls into fields in which most of them don't have enough interest or talent to succeed. “Learning disabilities” are another example of denying reality, and a growing problem at American universities. Some children are brighter than others, and learn faster. Pre-college education is a universal right in America, and it is common sense to give the slower children extra help. But some ambitious parents of slow children are not satisfied with this. They wish to pretend their children can do everything brighter children can do. When their children get to college they demand to be excused from doing anything they do badly, and when this is not possible they demand softer standards and relaxed rules. With the help of cooperative psychologists who certify these supposed “disabilities” and a misinterpretation of the Americans with Disabilities Act, these students demand privileges such as double time on examinations. Grades earned this way are lies, but these lies maintain the fiction that the slow students are not really slow at all. What harm is done? The integrity of the grading process is corrupted, and the grades earned by other students in honest competition are devalued. Weak students get grades they have not earned, and may build a career on them. Would you want to be treated by a doctor who was admitted to medical school only because he received double time on examinations? Perhaps the greatest harm is to the principles of fairness and honesty. Bending the rules for the “disabled” establishes the idea that rewards go to those who manipulate the system, not to those whose accomplishments are earned through honest effort, evaluated fairly. And it encourages everyone to lie about reality when it does not satisfy our desires. That is the path to the Challenger disaster, and much worse.
January 28,
1986
the space shuttle Challenger exploded on launch, killing all seven astronauts aboard in the worst space disaster ever. This catastrophe was
entirely
preventable. Engineers knew, and warned, that the solid fuel booster rockets of the shuttle were not safe in
cold
weather,
but
senior managers dismissed these warnings and insisted on launch. At the subsequent inquiry the physicist Richard Feynman summarized the debacle with the statement “Nature cannot
be fooled
”.

We have not learned that lesson. In more and more ways American society has
come
to confuse its
wishes
with
reality
, and to
pretend
that wished-for fictions are true.
In most cases
these fictions are
well intentioned
,
just
as we all
wish
the Challenger could have
been launched
safely
,
but
good
intentions do not
make
wishes
come
true.

We
ignore
history, which
shows
that most airplane hijackers are Arab. Refusing to “
ethnically
profile” airline passengers, airport security paid
little
attention to obvious
risks
, with the result that more than five thousand Americans
were murdered
by terrorists. All
because
we
deliberately
refused to recognize the obvious.

Most of our self-deception occurs in softer fields, where its consequences are less immediate and less
obviously
catastrophic, and where the ideological pressures to enshrine fantasy as
reality
are stronger.
For example
, two deaf
people
sued
YMCAs
for enormous sums of money after losing jobs as lifeguards on account of their deafness. We all
wish
the disabled could do everything
other
people
can do,
but
they cannot.
That is
why they
are called
disabled. The deaf cannot hear a call “
HELP
! ”. Should
people
drown to maintain the lie that deaf
people
can do a lifeguard's job?

We know how
AIDS
is transmitted
: by promiscuous sexual activity,
chiefly
homosexual, and by abusers of intravenous drugs
who
share hypodermic needles. The human body was not designed for these activities, and lacks the immunological defenses to deal with their consequences.
Except for
a
comparatively
few cases transmitted by transfused blood and blood products or
congenitally
, the victims of
AIDS
knowingly
and
deliberately
put themselves at
risk
.
AIDS
could be
stopped
by a program of contact tracing and quarantine, methods which
successfully
contained venereal and
other
communicable diseases in the
pre-antibiotic
era.
Instead
, public policy refuses to admit that
AIDS
is a consequence of behavior, a fact which everyone knows to be true, and pours a large fraction of our biomedical research effort into a search,
so
far unsuccessful, for a cure.

Education is
probably
the field in which we deceive ourselves the most,
because
the damage
only
appears decades later. We
pretend
that all
children
learn at the same rate and
in the same way
. Every teacher and parent knows this to be untrue, and to deny it is folly.
But
deny it we do.

We insist on teaching all
children
reading in the same manner,
even though
some
learn well with “look-say” methods (
also
known as “whole language”)
and others
require phonics. We
ignore
differences in ability, and cram dull, average and bright
students
into the same classrooms, boring the bright and leaving the dull behind, or reducing the education of all to the level of the slowest. When we observe that, on average, boys are better at mathematics than girls we refuse to accept that nature made them that way (
just
as nature made boys taller, on average).
Instead
we
pretend
this is the result of prejudice and custom, and spend a great deal of effort trying to coax girls into fields in which most of them don't have
enough
interest or talent to succeed.

“Learning disabilities” are another example of denying
reality
, and a growing problem at American universities.
Some
children
are brighter than others, and learn faster. Pre-college education is a universal right in America, and it is common sense to give the slower
children
extra
help
.
But
some
ambitious parents of slow
children
are not satisfied with this. They
wish
to
pretend
their
children
can do everything brighter
children
can do. When their
children
get
to college they demand to
be excused
from doing anything they do
badly
, and when this is not possible they demand softer standards and relaxed
rules
. With the
help
of cooperative psychologists
who
certify these supposed “disabilities” and a misinterpretation of the Americans with Disabilities Act, these
students
demand privileges such as double time on examinations. Grades
earned
this way are lies,
but
these lies maintain the fiction that the slow
students
are not
really
slow at all.

What harm
is done
? The integrity of the grading process
is corrupted
, and the grades
earned
by
other
students
in honest competition
are devalued
. Weak
students
get
grades they have not
earned
, and may build a career on them. Would you want to
be treated
by a doctor
who
was admitted
to medical school
only
because
he received double time on examinations?

Perhaps the greatest harm is to the principles of fairness and honesty. Bending the
rules
for the “disabled” establishes the
idea
that rewards go to those
who
manipulate the system, not to those whose accomplishments are
earned
through honest effort, evaluated
fairly
. And it encourages everyone to lie about
reality
when it does not satisfy our desires.
That is
the path to the Challenger disaster, and much worse.
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IELTS essay American society has come to confuse its wishes with reality

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