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Nowadays the rich are getting rich and the poor are getting poorer what problems does it cause and give solutions.

Nowadays the rich are getting rich and the poor are getting poorer what problems does it cause and give solutions. wK1WE
In this contemporary world, growth in poverty rate has increased the gap between rich and poor which results in making wealthier people more wealthy and the poor are poor gets more deeper into poverty. This essay intends to delve into some visible problems of this along with effective remedies to migrate it. To commence with, there are several problems caused by this issue. The prodominant one is that it will rise the sense of discrimination among wealthy people. To explicate it more, it has been generally seen that people with luxury lifestyle often become egoistic because of money due to which they donot behave well with people lower than them, which also shows their inferiority. Hence, equality among people cannot be established due to this problem. Probabing further, an another noteworthy problem is that this gap is a kind of curse for youth. In other words there is no lack of talent among youngsters belonging to poorer families. But they donot get proper education and chances to show their talent due to which their talent remained buried inside them which also causes wastage of their talent. As a result they start doing crimes because their is no other way left which further disturbs peaceful environment of country. This problem is not insurmountable, some measures must be taken into account in order to grapple with this. Firstly, government should come at front and take some necessary steps. In clear words, government should introduce some new policies in favour of poor people, for their development. for example, free education must be provided to them to bring their talent out. Hence it will result in overcoming this problem. On analysing the matter gingerly, it can be concluded that rising gap between rich and poor is a matter of great concern. However, if there is an eagle eye on it this problem would be eradicated soon.
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poor
which results in making wealthier
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people
more wealthy and the
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poor
are
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poor
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gets
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more deeper
into poverty. This essay intends to delve into
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some
visible
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problems
of this along with effective remedies to migrate it. To commence with, there are several
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problems
caused by this issue. The
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prodominant
one is that it will rise the sense of discrimination among wealthy
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people
. To explicate it more, it has been
generally
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seen
that
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people
with luxury lifestyle
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often
become egoistic
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because
of money due to which they
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donot
behave well with
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people
lower than them, which
also
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shows
their inferiority.
Hence
, equality among
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people
cannot
be established
due to this
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problem
.
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Probabing
further
,
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an another noteworthy
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problem
is that this gap is a kind of curse for youth.
In other words
there is no lack of
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talent
among youngsters belonging to poorer families.
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But
they
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donot
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get
proper education and chances to
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show
their
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talent
due to which their
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talent
remained buried inside them which
also
causes wastage of their
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talent
.
As a result
they
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start
doing crimes
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because
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their
is no other way
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left
which
further
disturbs peaceful environment of country. This
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problem
is not insurmountable,
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some
measures
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must
be taken
into account in order to grapple with this.
Firstly
,
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government
should
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come
at front and take
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some
necessary steps. In
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clear
words,
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government
should introduce
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some
new policies in
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favour
of
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poor
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people
, for their development.
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for
example, free education
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must
be provided
to them to bring their
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talent
out.
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Hence
it will result in overcoming this
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problem
. On
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analysing
the matter
gingerly
, it can
be concluded
that rising gap between rich and
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poor
is a matter of great concern.
However
, if there is an eagle eye on it this
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problem
would
be eradicated
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soon
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays the rich are getting rich and the poor are getting poorer what problems does it cause and give solutions.

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  American English
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