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Tell about your current disire

Tell about your current disire VERk3
I have the affluence of health, love with my Kaka, my family, my finance, and my beauty since my shape body is coming apparently as well as my lovemate is extremely wonderful with his sharing and beloved acts for me along with my family is walking into happiness. Besides, I strongly believe that wealthy finance comes to me due to my diligence as well as my independent money. For the record, I make everyone's acquaintance, who I admired about their outstanding career, happy family, love and have many sit-downs with them. Afterward, I express my earnestness, especially in finance.
I have the affluence of health,
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love
with my
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Kaka
, my family, my finance, and my beauty since my shape body is coming
apparently
as well
as my
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lovemate
is
extremely
wonderful with his sharing and beloved acts for me along with my family is walking into happiness.
Besides
, I
strongly
believe that wealthy finance
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
to me due to my diligence
as well
as my independent money. For the record, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
everyone's acquaintance, who I admired about their outstanding career, happy family,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
and have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
sit-downs with them. Afterward, I express my earnestness,
especially
in finance.
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IELTS essay Tell about your current disire

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
99 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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