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IELTS essay write an article telling us about a festival that you and your family celebrate

Essay

American English

3 paragraphs

132 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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