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Write about your weekend. write 100 words.

Last weekend I very busy. On Saturday I worked all morning. After I finished work I travelled into the city centre and I had lunch with a friend. In the afternoon we went shopping and I bought a birthday present for my sister. On Saturday evening it rained, so I stayed at home and watched a film. Sunday was more relaxing than saturday. I listened to music and did my portuguese homework. In the evening some friends came to my house for dinner. I made lasagne and we played card games.
Last weekend I
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very
busy. On Saturday I worked all morning. After I finished work I travelled into the city
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centre
and I had lunch with a friend. In the afternoon we went shopping and I
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bought
a birthday present for my sister. On Saturday evening it rained,
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so
I stayed at home and
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watched
a film. Sunday was more relaxing than
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saturday
. I listened to music and did my
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portuguese
homework. In the evening
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some
friends came to my
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house
for dinner. I made
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lasagne
and we played card games.

IELTS essay Write about your weekend. write 100 words.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
91 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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