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How to keep fit? Write 100 to 150 words.

In Hungary, most of the people prefer to stay indoors and watch TV all day. I consider this as a terrible attitude! The excuses mostly the price of the sports, but that is why I am going to recommend a few, low priced activity. First, running. I know, someone says it's boring or too hard, but it is one of the cheapest sport, you only need a pair of shoe! The second one is hiking. There are some fascinating parts in Hungary, and it is an excellent activity, to visit these places! There are loads of sports, which are too expensive, especially in Hungary. Like skiing! Because we do not have gigantic mountains, and the weather also quite warm, but I in spite of all this, I recommend skiing, I think it is a fantastic sport! To sum up, you have hundreds of opportunities, so get up and choose one and do it!
In Hungary, most of the
people
prefer to stay indoors and
watch
TV all day. I consider this as a terrible attitude! The excuses
mostly
the price of the sports,
but
that is
why I am going to recommend a few,
low priced
activity.

First
, running. I know, someone says it's boring or too
hard
,
but
it is one of the cheapest sport, you
only
need a
pair of shoe
! The second one is hiking. There are
some
fascinating parts in Hungary, and it is an excellent activity, to visit these places!

There are loads of sports, which are too expensive,
especially
in Hungary. Like skiing!
Because
we do not have gigantic mountains, and the weather
also
quite warm,
but
I
in spite of
all this, I recommend skiing, I
think
it is a fantastic sport!

To sum up, you have hundreds of opportunities,
so
get
up and choose one and do it!
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IELTS essay How to keep fit? Write 100 to 150 words.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
153 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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