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Write about your summer holiday

Write about your summer holiday gbNl7

Long time no see you guys. This summer vacation was reply long, right? The reason is covid 19. But the whole world is still trying their best so we need keep believing. Even though we are students, we can contribute by stydying well and staying at home. Because, the summer vacation was relly long, so I did a lot of things. Today, I want to tell you about my summer vacation. Because the covid 19 was complicated, so me and my family were not able to travel anywhere so we just stay at home all time. I helped my parents with the housework. Sometimes I tried to make some cake and food. Now I can make Thịt Kho tàu and rice cakes. I also drew some pictures with many colors because i think colors can make me relax. I tried making some crafts out of scrap paper. I tried some new things like doing yoga with my mom and plating trees. I also clean up the desk and prepare well for the new school year

Long time no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you guys. This summer vacation was reply long, right? The reason is Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
covid 19
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But
 the whole world is still
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so
 we need This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 believing. Even though
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stydying
 well and staying at home. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
, the summer vacation was Possible spelling mistake found.reallyKellyrallyrelayrelyreply
relly
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so
 I did This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 things. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
, I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you about my summer vacation. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 the Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
covid 19
was complicated
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 me and my family were not able to travel anywhere This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 stay at home all time. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 my parents with the housework. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
 I tried to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 cake and food. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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Kho
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tàu
 and rice cakes. I also
 drew This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 pictures with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 colors This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 colors can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 me relax. I tried making This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 crafts out of scrap paper. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 tried This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 new things like doing yoga with my mom and plating trees. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
also
 clean up the desk and prepare well for the new school Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphyear.year!year?year:year,year;
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