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Write about your summer holiday

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Long time no see you guys. This summer vacation was reply long, right? The reason is covid 19. But the whole world is still trying their best so we need keep believing. Even though we are students, we can contribute by stydying well and staying at home. Because, the summer vacation was relly long, so I did a lot of things. Today, I want to tell you about my summer vacation. Because the covid 19 was complicated, so me and my family were not able to travel anywhere so we just stay at home all time. I helped my parents with the housework. Sometimes I tried to make some cake and food. Now I can make Thịt Kho tàu and rice cakes. I also drew some pictures with many colors because i think colors can make me relax. I tried making some crafts out of scrap paper. I tried some new things like doing yoga with my mom and plating trees. I also clean up the desk and prepare well for the new school year
Long time no
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see
you guys. This summer vacation was reply long, right? The reason is
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covid 19
.
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the whole world is
still
trying their best
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so
we need
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keep
believing.
Even though
we are students, we can contribute by
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stydying
well and staying at home.
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Because
, the summer vacation was
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relly
long,
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so
I did
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a lot of
things.
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Today
, I want to
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tell
you about my summer vacation.
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Because
the
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covid 19
was complicated
,
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so
me and my family were not able to travel anywhere
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so
we
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just
stay at home all time. I
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helped
my parents with the housework.
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Sometimes
I tried to
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make
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some
cake and food.
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Now
I can
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make
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Thịt
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Kho
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tàu
and rice cakes. I
also
drew
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some
pictures with
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many
colors
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because
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i
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think
colors can
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make
me relax. I tried making
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some
crafts out of scrap paper.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
tried
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some
new things like doing yoga with my mom and plating trees.
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I
also
clean up the desk and prepare well for the new school
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year
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IELTS essay Write about your summer holiday

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
174 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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