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I study in Ben Thuy secondary school. There are some things I don't like about my school. It's my school teacher who gives a lot of homework to students, and it was very difficult for us to do all the homework. In addition, my school often gives students many tests, which are quite difficult. There is another thing that i don't like about my school in particular and all schools in vietnam in general is that recess is too short, only 5 minutes and too many lessons. Even so, my school also has a lot of good things. For example, teachers and students at my school are very friendly. Teachers are always available to answer students' questions. Also, my school teacher is kind. My school also has a box of what students want to say, students will write what they want to say on paper and put it in the box, teachers will read it and answer those problems. That's why I love my teachers and my school. My school may not be the perfect school but I like it. I love my shool.
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IELTS essay write about your school and why you like or dislike it

Essay
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1 paragraphs
184 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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