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Global warming is increasing and sea level is rising.

Global warming is increasing and sea level is rising. paRb0

Warming rate around the world indeed inclining with the extreme pace. The drastic effect could be seen with the examination of ocean water levels. Related several reasons are of this alarming situation are discussed further. Major causes that chiefly noticed are the utilization of fume causing products. Especially, vehicles which every second release the gases that increase the heating on earth. Nonetheless ninety percent of the population has the knowledge of their dangers, still people has not been halting on the habit of auto -dependency. Consequences, sea levels would one day cover the land area and will have little space for habitants.

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IELTS essay Global warming is increasing and sea level is rising.

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American English

2 paragraphs

102 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Task Achievement: 5.5

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