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Write about your mom-who you love the most

Write about your mom-who you love the most J3o70

Everyone both has mom, so I do. My mother's name is Bong. She is thirty-six years old. At the age of 36, she still young and gogerous. She is teaching at Dong Phu Secondary school. Despite being a music and civic education teacher, she also good at literature. She often teaches me literature, civic education or how to sing beautifully. She cooks very well so she always teach me how to cook. I love that. I can say that, her apperance in my life is such a wonderful thing. I've learnt a lot of things from her. I used to be a little bit shy to communicate with new people, but thanks to my mom's encouragement now I am not afraid to make new friends or communicate with othe people. Sometimes I wondered how she could be such a perfect person like that. I love my mom very much

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 at literature. She This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
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 teaches me literature, civic education or how to sing beautifully
. She cooks This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
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 she always The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "teaches", "taught".teachestaught
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 me how to cook. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
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 that. I can say that, her Possible spelling mistake found.appearance
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 in my life is such a wonderful thing. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 things from her. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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 to be a Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".littlebit
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 shy to communicate with new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 thanks to my mom's encouragement This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I am not afraid to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
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 new friends or communicate with Possible spelling mistake found.theothero the
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
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 I wondered how she could be such a perfect person like that. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 my mom This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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