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Write about Your hometown. Give your opinion.

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My house is located in the hill. Although, I don't like my hometown. On the other hand, a number of people like my hometown. On the other hand, I can't believe how much they like my hometown. Furthermore, my hometown is very beautiful servel my friends tall me. Moreover, I don't think so. But, sometime I think my hometown is beautiful. Firstly, my hometown is very precious. Though, I don't like my hometown I don't know why? In Addition, in near future I know I would like my hometown.
My
house
is located
in the hill.
Although
, I
don't
like my
hometown
.
On the other hand
, a number of
people
like my
hometown
.
On the other hand
, I can't believe how much they like my
hometown
.
Furthermore
, my
hometown
is
very
beautiful
servel
my friends tall me.
Moreover
, I
don't
think
so
.
But
, sometime I
think
my
hometown
is
beautiful
.
Firstly
, my
hometown
is
very
precious. Though, I
don't
like my
hometown
I
don't
know why?
In Addition
, in near future I know I would like my
hometown
.
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IELTS essay Write about Your hometown. Give your opinion.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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