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The Impact of Pandemic, 2019

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The pandemic 2019 is the consequence of coronavirus, originated from Wuhan, a city of China. As a matter of fact this pandemic is global, which has killed more than three million human being worldwide. In essence, WHO and research organization have endeavored tremendously for prevention, control and vaccines. Such effort has contributed to control the first wave of coronavirus but the second wave has attacked the people globally. I argue that entire world has experienced the big challenge to control the coronavirus. The corona virus is transmitted through air, close distance and goods, touched by infected people. Therefore, the government, globally excluding few countries endorsed lockdown, physical distance and also banned the social gathering. All such ideas are for the prevention of coronavirus. In spite of such, preventive measurements, the corona virus infected 30 million people world wide. The preventive option is not sufficient to break the chain of coronavirus so vaccines are essential. As a result, the research organization made the vaccines to control coronavirus. Such vaccines has been factor to control the corona virus. However, the coronavirus changes its form very frequently so same vaccines can not function properly. Hence, corona virus is challenge against world.
The pandemic 2019 is the consequence of coronavirus, originated from Wuhan, a city of China. As a matter of fact this pandemic is global, which has killed more than three million human being worldwide. In essence, WHO and research organization have endeavored
tremendously
for prevention,
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control
and
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vaccines
. Such effort has contributed to
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control
the
first
wave of coronavirus
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but
the second wave has attacked the
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people
globally. I argue that entire world has experienced the
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big
challenge to
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control
the coronavirus. The corona
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virus
is transmitted
through air, close distance and
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goods
, touched by infected
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people
.
Therefore
, the
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government
, globally excluding few countries endorsed lockdown, physical distance and
also
banned the social gathering. All such
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ideas
are for the prevention of coronavirus.
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In spite of
such, preventive measurements, the corona
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virus
infected 30 million
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people
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world wide
. The preventive option is not sufficient to break the chain of coronavirus
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so
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vaccines
are essential.
As a result
, the research organization made the
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vaccines
to
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control
coronavirus. Such
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vaccines
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has
been factor to
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control
the corona
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virus
.
However
, the coronavirus
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changes
its form
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very
frequently
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so
same
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vaccines
can not function
properly
.
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, corona
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virus
is challenge against world.
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IELTS essay The Impact of Pandemic, 2019

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  American English
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198 words
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