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Introduction: A Son's superhero, A daughter's first love his dad. Father are unequivocally the most important personally in an indivduals life. And from teaching them how to speak to running after their bicycle preventing their fall to sharing their wisdom and being a teacher of greater thing in life, the rde of a father is prodigious. Importance of father: In my life my dad is everything for me. I cant live without him, even i cant thought about that. And my father's different place in my heart. My father is not only my father, he is a householder such as he is a son, husband, father brother. He doing everything for hor huppiness. my dad sporting me every place and stand for me. without father we are nothing. he is my father such as hero friend family techer.
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: In my life my dad is everything for me. I
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about that. And my father's
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place in my heart. My
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my
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, he is a householder such as he is a son, husband,
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brother.
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dad sporting me every place and stand for me. without
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we are nothing.
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IELTS essay Write about your favourite person?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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