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I believe that people should learn and about the utilities, necessities and logistics around them in order to improve them, also learn to appreciate them. Nowadays climate change is set to ruin and alter the course of humanity. Learning about STEM has played a huge role in shaping the modern civilization. STEM has developed very rapidly on the contrary sustainability has only been a topic of discussion for only a decade or two. STEM and sustainability should coexist in upcoming developments of humanity.
I believe that
people
should learn and about the utilities, necessities

and logistics around them in order to
improve
them,
also
learn to appreciate

them. Nowadays climate
change
is set
to ruin and alter the course of humanity.

Learning about STEM has played a huge role in shaping the modern civilization.

STEM has developed
very
rapidly
on the contrary
sustainability has
only
been a

topic of discussion for
only
a decade or two. STEM and sustainability should

coexist in upcoming developments of humanity.
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Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
83 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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