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Congrats someone with their new company

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Congrats with your new company and partnership, and all these years of experiences in WF for sure you will reach the next level soon. We are very excited with your new proposal for our mutual relationship, we also will loop Jason in as our Oriental Logistic group specialist for the near future contact as a handling agent, pls feel free to contact with us if you have any further thoughts, looking forward to hear from you soon.
Congrats with your new
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company
and partnership, and all these years of experiences in WF for sure you will reach the
next
level
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soon
. We are
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very
excited with your new proposal for our mutual relationship, we
also
will loop Jason in as our Oriental Logistic group specialist for the near future contact as a handling agent,
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pls
feel free to contact with us if you have any
further
thoughts, looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you
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soon
.
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IELTS essay Congrats someone with their new company

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
77 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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