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Write about the following topic: Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology r v.2

: Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology r v. 2
In this modern era, innovative machines like dishwashers and computers have started to control human lives. Some people think that these technological advancement make human lives easier and stress-free while others believe that these devices is a boon. I strongly believe that depending on machines does reduces our stress levels and makes us much happier. Following are some reasons why I think modern technology reduces stress. Primary reason is that doing work with the help of machines saves time and energy. Nowadays most people are leading a hectic and busy schedule and finding time to do all the work becomes difficult. For instance working women' s finds devices like washing machines and other household appliances a life saver as it does most of the job. Hence they can get enough time to relax and spend quality time with their near and dear ones. Secondly, machines are more efficient than manual labour. Activities which take hours by human labour will take only a few minutes to be completed by machines. For example, in a restaurant, dishwashers does the job of cleaning the dishes rather than manually cleaning it. Another reason which adds to reducing stress of mankind is that machines are cost-effective. Taking previous example, employing labours to do the same job requires efficient training and a basic pay. While using devices, the amount can be saved and utilized for other purposes. Lastly I would like to conclude by stating that modern technology and innovations is definitely a stress buster for people making their lives peaceful and happier.
In this modern era, innovative
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machines
like dishwashers and computers have
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started
to control human
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lives
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people
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think
that these technological advancement
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make
human
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lives
easier and
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stress
-free while others believe that these devices is a boon. I
strongly
believe that depending on
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machines
does
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reduces
our
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stress
levels and
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makes
us much happier.

Following are
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some
reasons why I
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think
modern technology
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reduces
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stress
. Primary reason is that doing work with the
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help
of
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machines
saves
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time
and energy. Nowadays most
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people
are leading a hectic and busy schedule and finding
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time
to do all the work becomes difficult.
For instance
working
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women&
#039; s finds devices like washing
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machines
and other household appliances a life saver as it does most of the job.
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Hence
they can
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get
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enough
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time
to relax and spend quality
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time
with their near and dear ones.
Secondly
,
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machines
are more efficient than manual
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labour
. Activities which take hours by human
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labour
will take
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only
a few minutes to
be completed
by
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machines
.
For example
, in a restaurant, dishwashers does the job of cleaning the dishes
rather
than
manually
cleaning it. Another reason which
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adds
to reducing
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stress
of mankind is that
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machines
are cost
-effective. Taking previous example, employing
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labours
to do the same job requires efficient training and a basic pay. While using devices, the amount can
be saved
and utilized for other purposes.

Lastly
I would like
to conclude
by stating that modern technology and innovations is definitely a
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stress
buster for
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people
making their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
peaceful and happier.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay : Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology r v. 2

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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