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Write about teaching someone something you are good at

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I enjoy imparting my knowledge with others. Today I will share my experience when I taught my skills to one friend of mine. I'm really good at doing sketching, this is not my profession but I really love to do painting in my free time or when I feel stress. My friends are very impressed by my this skill and one day one of my good friend was keen to learn from me. I have seen her doing sketching, she just need proper guidance and some sort of patience so that she can also draw neatly. I started give her time after my school time, she was dedicated to learn sketching. After few days we didn't saw any improvement so she decided to quit as she was very upset with her performance. I tried to convince her, make her realise that every skill need time and patience. We all love learning something new in our lives but forget that growing skills is like a seed, it takes time to become a plant vice versa skills need time to shine. We have to work hard for everything, nothing is come automatically in your life. Being an artist I know the true meaning of patience, it takes hours or days to make something perfect but it takes few seconds to say what a great painting or I didn't like it. Overall I love sharing my knowledge with my friend, this help was not out of obligation but out of true friendship to boost her confidence and help her to develop her artist skills. Art is an other meaning of being genuine. I was genuine to her and it was achievement for both of us, I will never regret helping a friend in need. As a friend in need is friend indeed.
I enjoy imparting my knowledge with others.
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do painting
in my free
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time
or when I feel
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. My
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very
impressed by my this
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skill
and one day one of my
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good
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friend
was keen to learn from me. I have
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seen
her
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doing sketching
, she
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need
proper guidance and
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sort of patience
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that she can
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draw
neatly
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after my school
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, she
was dedicated
to learn sketching. After few days we didn't
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any improvement
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she decided to quit as she was
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upset with her performance. I tried to convince her,
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make
her
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realise
that every
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skill
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need
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time
and patience. We all
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love
learning something new in our
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forget that growing
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skills
is like a seed, it takes
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time
to become a plant vice versa
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skills
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need
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time
to shine. We
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work
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for everything, nothing is
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in your life. Being an artist I know the true meaning of patience, it takes hours or days to
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make
something perfect
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but
it takes few seconds to say what a great painting or I didn't like it.
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I
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love
sharing my knowledge with my
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, this
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help
was not out of obligation
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but
out of true friendship to boost her confidence and
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her to develop her artist
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skills
. Art is
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an other
meaning of being genuine. I was genuine to her and it was achievement for both of us, I will never regret helping a
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friend
in
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need
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As
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friend
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IELTS essay Write about teaching someone something you are good at

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
299 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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