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Write about my health and progess lose weight or gain weight.

Write about my health and progess lose weight or gain weight. 6laM8

All my relatives often call me by a especial name, Diep Lun, since I was born in a rather large body. Difference for other children, I am as pretty healthy and absord the nutrients, so I was already getting bigger and bigger. I used to have a huge appetitive, fed on any food that my mom made. When I want to school, I was rediculed for my weights. Someone believed that I was unable to take part in movement games, they scared I would make team lose because of the slowness. I was so disappointed that I decided to change myself. I started turning up websites advertising effective ways to lose weight. I was only at 5 grade at that time. I gradually consumed less food and drank too much water per day. After days, I felt off cold and was always in a stage of fatigue, do not want to anything. During the sick days, my parents was pretty on edge, my mom tried to look up solutary and reliable information about getting lean. She diggently creatured the menus ensured the elements of soft weight loss and cheered me up from my self-doubts. Finally, I was back on my feet after many weeks and my weight number was dimished, which I was really over the moon. Recently, I am bright-eyed and bushy tailed, I no longer have to feel guilty about myself. Despite being busy with study. I still try to take care of my body and health scientifically.

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often
 call me by Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
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 especial name, Possible spelling mistake found.DiedDeepDieDiesDietDip
Diep
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absord
 the nutrients, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I was already getting bigger and bigger. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to have a huge Possible spelling mistake found.repetitiveappetiteappositive
appetitive
, fed on any food that my mom made. When I want to school, I was Possible spelling mistake found.ridiculed
rediculed
 for my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaddensitygravitypressuresubstanceburden
weights
. Someone believed that I was unable to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in movement games, they scared I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 team lose This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the slowness. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 disappointed that I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 myself.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 turning up websites advertising effective ways to lose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaddensitygravitypressuresubstanceburden
weight
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 at 5 grade at that time. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
gradually
 consumed less food and drank too much water per day. After days, I felt off This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 and was always in a stage of fatigue, do not want to anything.

During the sick days, my parents was pretty on edge, my mom tried to look up Possible spelling mistake found.solitarysalutary
solutary
 and reliable information about getting lean. She Possible spelling mistake found.dig gently
diggently
Possible spelling mistake found.creaturecreatures
creatured
 the menus ensured the elements of soft You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaddensitygravitypressuresubstanceburden
weight
 loss and cheered me up from my self-doubts. Finally
, I was back on my feet after This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 weeks and my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaddensitygravitypressuresubstanceburden
weight
 number was Possible spelling mistake found.finisheddismisseddiminisheddishedfamisheddemised
dimished
, which I was really
 over the moon.

Recently, I am bright-eyed and bushy tailed, I no longer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 feel guilty about myself. Despite being busy with study. I still
 try to take care of my body and health scientifically
. 