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I was born with a beautiful face. When I was at the age 15, my face started getting acne. I was on edge and scared it. My face currenty is so terriable that I do not see myself in mirror. That made me feel shamed and lose confidented. My parents also anxious about my situation. They advised me to go see doctor to find a solution ways. After that time, I had accurately progress to prevent acne sticking in the face. Firstly, I must clearly face only twice a day to avoid irratiting. The doctor told me that I had to an eating diet and did regularly exercise. Secondly, the doctor helped catch on acne by the way told apart it and give me list production to dimish acne. It is neccesary that I not use hand to touch to face. My parents was pretty on egde, my mother tried to do cooking by list the doctor given. Definitely, I see my heart decreased acne to make me release my adverse promotions. I also try to depend on doctor introduction and improve myself
I
was born
with a
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beautiful
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face
. When I was at the age 15, my
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face
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started
getting acne. I was on edge and scared it.

My
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face
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currenty
is
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so
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terriable
that I do not
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see
myself in mirror. That made me feel shamed and lose
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confidented
. My parents
also
anxious about my situation. They advised me to go
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see
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doctor
to find a solution ways. After that time, I had
accurately
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progress
to
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prevent
acne sticking in the face.

Firstly
, I
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must
clearly
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face
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only
twice a day to avoid
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irratiting
. The
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doctor
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told
me that I had to an eating diet and did
regularly
exercise.

Secondly
, the
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doctor
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helped
catch on acne by the way
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told
apart it and give me list production to
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dimish
acne. It is
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neccesary
that I not
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use
hand to touch to
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face
. My parents
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was
pretty on
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egde
, my mother tried to do cooking by list the
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doctor
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given
.

Definitely, I
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see
my heart decreased acne to
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make
me release my adverse promotions. I
also
try to depend on
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doctor
introduction and
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improve
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myself
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IELTS essay Write about introduce myself in that time holiday

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
182 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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