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Write about cosmetics as much as you know.

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Nowadays, cosmetics are very popular among people. It is especially popular among women. Our world of cosmetics has evolved dated back a thousand years ago. Over the years, the quality has improved. But cosmetics are not just for women, also men can. If we say cosmetic, we all know that is makeup. Many people nowadays apply makeup. Because such cosmetics can give us confidence. And I also like cosmetics. They are so beautiful. Lipstick is the most I like. If I apply Lipstick, I feel like so confidence. I think every girl will like cosmetics. Because it can make beauty. But it can not be compared with natural beauty. No makeup shows a woman’s natural beauty.
Nowadays,
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cosmetics
are
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very
popular among
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people
. It is
especially
popular among women. Our world of
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cosmetics
has evolved dated back a thousand years ago. Over the years, the quality has
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improved
.
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But
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cosmetics
are not
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just
for women,
also
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men
can. If we say
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cosmetic
, we all know
that is
makeup.
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Many
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people
nowadays apply makeup.
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Because
such
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cosmetics
can give us confidence. And I
also
like
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cosmetics
. They are
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so
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beautiful
. Lipstick is the most I like. If I apply Lipstick, I feel like
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so
confidence. I
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think
every girl will like
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cosmetics
.
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Because
it can
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make
beauty.
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But
it can not
be compared
with natural beauty. No makeup
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shows
a woman’s natural beauty.
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IELTS essay Write about cosmetics as much as you know.

Essay
  American English
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116 words
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