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The given table compares the eight consumer items owned in bratian between 1972 to 1983. Overa

The given table compares the eight consumer items owned in bratian between 1972 to 1983. Overa gqyA7
The given table compares the eight consumer items owned in uk between 1972 to 1983 in percentage. Overall, the most popular electronic items in britain was television, whereas the less owned household appliances were dishwasher and video which had been introduced to the british families later in 1978 and a983 respectively. As for the table data, tv and vaccum cleaner were always popular in english famailies with their ownership percentage 93 and 87 respectively. Likewise freez and washing machine were also the most useable electronic items in uk after tv which was owned by 70% houses in 1972 and the percentage increased to over 90 after 10 years. Interstingly, the video and diswasher were less popular in uk, while video was only introduce in 1983 only 15% houses had them. However, dishwasher only 3% families owned them initialy in 1978 and increase upto 8% in 1983.
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table compares the eight consumer items
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owned
in
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between 1972 to 1983
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, the most popular electronic items in
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britain
was television, whereas the less
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owned
household appliances were dishwasher and video which had
been introduced
to the
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british
families later in 1978 and a983
respectively
. As for the table data,
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tv
and
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vaccum
cleaner were always popular in
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english
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famailies
with their ownership percentage 93 and 87
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freez
and washing machine were
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the most useable electronic items in
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uk
after
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tv
which was
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by 70%
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houses
in 1972 and the percentage increased to over 90 after 10 years.
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Interstingly
, the video and
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diswasher
were less popular in
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uk
, while video was
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introduce in 1983
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only
15%
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houses
had them.
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, dishwasher
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only
3% families
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in 1978 and increase
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8% in 1983.
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IELTS essay The given table compares the eight consumer items owned in bratian between 1972 to 1983. Overa

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