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write about conflict between you and your parents .

write about conflict between you and your parents. YRLr5
In my family, my parents are open-minded person, so we don’t have too much conflicts. If any, this is my parents complain that what I wear. I often received criticisms about this problem from my parents. I always wear the clothes which have simple colors like black, white, blue, … and it has a big size. For example, my size is L but when I buy clothes I often buy size XL or XXL. However, my parents forbid me to wear this clothes. Besides that, they always want me to wear clothes which colorful and cramped. I remember, had a time when my mother bought for me a red and white striped shirt, I didn’t like it but she makes me wear it so I didn’t agree then my mom got angry and she tore the shirt. I explained with them and I felt regret about that. I expect that they will open to my dressing like other things and they won’t care too much about what I wear.
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are open-minded person,
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we don’t have too
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conflicts. If any, this is my
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parents
complain that what I
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wear
. I
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often
received criticisms about this problem from my
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parents
. I always
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wear
the
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clothes
which have simple colors like black, white, blue, … and it has a
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big
size.
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, my size is L
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when I
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buy
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clothes
I
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often
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buy
size XL or XXL.
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, my
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parents
forbid me to
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wear
this
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clothes
.
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that, they always want me to
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wear
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clothes
which colorful and cramped. I remember, had a time when my mother
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bought
for me a red and white striped shirt, I didn’t like it
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she
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me
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it
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so
I didn’t
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then my mom
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angry and
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with them and I felt regret about that.
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I
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that they will open to my dressing like other
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things and
they won’t care too much about what I
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wear
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IELTS essay write about conflict between you and your parents.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
169 words
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