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Happiness is difficult to determine. Factor to determine happiness

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While everyone wants to live happy but certain reason can make people difficult. while this trend hapiness is often considered difficult to define. In my point of view, happiness can be difine by different factor according to human nature. Similarly looking to human there is many factor to be happy. Due to living in a society people need facilities, fulfill their demand. However, people want to live as a facilitate life. For example everyone need health service, education for children, good transportation to make their life ease. No one wants to live their life as a difficulty. In addition, Both wealth and health determine the happiness of people. personally people do work for their ease life like good health, education, transportation facility which determines happiness. In conclusion, there is difficult to determine the happiness but according to their needs happiness can be determined.
While everyone wants to
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certain reason can
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make
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people
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while
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hapiness
is
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considered difficult to define.

In my point of view,
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happiness
can be
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difine
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factor according to human nature.
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Similarly
looking to human there is
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many
factor to be happy. Due to living in a society
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people
need facilities, fulfill their demand.

However
,
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people
want to
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live
as
After 'a', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'facilitate' is correct. If 'facilitate' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
a facilitate
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life
.
For example
everyone need health service, education for children,
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good
transportation to
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make
their
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life
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ease
. No one wants to
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live
their
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life
as a difficulty.

In addition
, Both wealth and health determine the
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happiness
of
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people
.
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personally
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people
do work for their
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ease
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life
like
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good
health, education, transportation facility which determines happiness.

In conclusion
, there is difficult to determine the
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happiness
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but
according to their needs
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happiness
can
be determined
.
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IELTS essay Happiness is difficult to determine. Factor to determine happiness

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
143 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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