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Write about a person who you miss the most

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I am sure that: everybody always have a secret for ourselves; it can be nice memories or special troubles but in the common way, it is the things which you don't want who else knows or are shy to talk with friends. In my mind, my mysterious thing is my crush whom i think he expressed me a lot. I make friend with him through Hago which is an online game. Actually, it was too hard for me to talk with srangers because i was timid at that time. And one day, i met him while i was playing game so i chated with him. I took in him that i was a policewoman and enough age- it means i am above 18. He believed me and we told about ourselves. I also remember he praised me that you had a great voice. Because of my 13 age, i can't chat with him all time. Therefore i found the way to hide him and stop talking with him. i was afraid that he would not like my voice in the long time. It sounds so silly but at that time i was only a little girl. In consequences, i lost contact with him and now like so, i am 15. In the time of summer, i can not stop thinkinng about him. I realize that: i have not thought about him for a long time. I feel so sorry than crush him. I think he liked me in the short time and was sad about me, may be. I don't know that i am thoughtful or it is the real but i always hope that he has a few feelings with me despite of his sadness. It is evil and selfish of me but i want to meet him again and tell sorry to him. And in the last sentences, i want to tell that: although i only chat with him for a short time, i can feel he is kind and has a forward-thinking. I miss and love him so much. It is impossible for him to know my mind but i also hope that oneday, he can.

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have
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
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 he expressed me a lot.

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make
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because
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 am above 18. He believed me and we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
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hide
 him and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 talking with him. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 was afraid that he would not like my voice in the long You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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. It sounds This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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but
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 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 girl. In consequences, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 lost contact with him and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 like This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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 am 15.

In the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 of summer, Did you mean "I"?I
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 can not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
Possible spelling mistake found.thinking
thinkinng
 about him. I realize that: Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 have not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 about him for a long You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
. I feel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Use "sorrier" to make a comparison with this adjective.sorrier
sorry
 than crush him. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 he liked me in the short You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 and was sad about me, may be.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 don't know that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 am thoughtful or it is the real This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 always hope that he has a few feelings with me Did you mean "despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?despite
despite of
 his sadness. It is evil and selfish of me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 him again and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 sorry to him. And in the last sentences, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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tell
 that: although Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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, Did you mean "I"?I
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 can feel he is kind and has a forward-thinking. I miss and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 him This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much. It is impossible for him to know my mind This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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also
 hope that Possible spelling mistake found.one day
oneday
, he can. 