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Spaghettis is one of my favorite foods. I make it one time in the week. For cooking it, I use Spaghettis, soya, tomato, onion, salt, pepper, oil and mushroom if I have it. At first, I boil water, salt and some oil. After that, I add Spaghettis to them and wait for 5 to 10 minuets. I chop onion and fry them in a pan. Then I add soya, salt, pepper and mushroom to it. After 5-10 minuets, I add tomato with a few water to it and wait to cook. Finally I mix Spaghettis and materials in the pan, and leave them in oven for 20 minuets. After that my food is ready.
Spaghettis
is one of my favorite foods. I
make
it one time in the week. For cooking it, I
use
Spaghettis
,
soya
, tomato, onion, salt, pepper, oil and mushroom if I have it. At
first
, I boil water, salt and
some
oil. After that, I
add
Spaghettis
to them and wait for 5 to 10
minuets
. I chop onion and fry them in a pan. Then I
add
soya
, salt, pepper and mushroom to it. After 5-10
minuets
, I
add
tomato with
a few water
to it and wait to cook.
Finally
I mix
Spaghettis
and materials in the pan, and
leave
them in oven for 20
minuets
.
After
that my food is ready.
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IELTS essay write about a meal that I like it

Essay
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114 words
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