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write about a holiday you want to go on in the future and the essential and non essential items you will take with you

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India is famous for its natural beauty in the world and every year thousands of tourists visit the nation to enjoy the scenic view of nature. I want to go there in the coming winter vacations to enjoy the beautiful snowfall on the mountains. My friend ( Viet Anh ) lives there and he always invited me to come there. He told me about the scenic beauty of nature, some famous places. I think the essentials when coming to India are Rupees or USD, medicine, sunscreen, clothes, . . . and non essential is cutlery because Indians usually eat with their hands ( Viet Anh told me about it ). When I come to India, I will visit the hilly area because of its beauty. There are tall trees and snowfall on the trees presents a scenic view of nature. Moreover, there is less air pollution in these areas because of the availability of a large number of trees. So I am planning in advance so that I have no difficulty when we would go there. I have also taken permission from my parents for this.

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 of its beauty. There are tall trees and snowfall on the trees presents a scenic view of nature. Moreover
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 that I have no difficulty when we would go there. I have also
 taken permission from my parents for this. 