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high school and vocational school

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Many say that high school is harder than vocational school but it mostly depends on what courses you pick in high school. It is true that there's more writing and learning than in vocational school, but writing essays and summaries have increased in vocational school compared to how it was five years ago. In my opinion, people who already know what job they want in the future usually go to vocational school. And people who may not know what they want to do in the future generally go to high school, because they don’t have to pick a profession as early as the people that go to vocational school and they have lots of choices for the future.
Many
say that high
school
is harder than vocational
school
but
it
mostly
depends on what courses you pick in high
school
. It is true that there's more writing and learning than in vocational
school
,
but
writing essays and summaries have increased in vocational
school
compared to how it was five years ago.

In my opinion,
people
who already know what job they want in the future
usually
go to vocational
school
. And
people
who may not know what they want to do in the future
generally
go to high
school
,
because
they don’t
have to
pick a profession as early as the
people
that go to vocational
school and
they have lots of choices for the future.
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IELTS essay high school and vocational school

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
118 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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