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Write about a chore you like and a chore you dislike the most and why

Write about a chore you like and a chore you dislike the most and why m8j1K
In my family, housework is divided equally among all members and I am no exception. I have to do a lot of work: Cooking, washing dishes, sweeping the house, drying clothes, …In which, I like to cook the most because I like eating and it gives me the tinkering and creativity in each dish so that the whole family can enjoy the food. I can freely create new dishes and my favorite thing is cook for my parents after working hard. However, the household chore that I don't want to do is sweep the yard. My yard is quite large and sweeping is very tiring and I spend too much time sweeping the yard. Housework is really fun although there are some things I don't like, but I'm happy that I can reduce the pressure on you.
In my family, housework
is divided
equally
among all
members and
I am no exception. I
have to
do
a lot of
work: Cooking, washing dishes, sweeping the
house
, drying clothes, …
In
which, I like to cook the most
because
I like eating and it gives me the tinkering and creativity in each dish
so
that the whole family can enjoy the food. I can
freely
create new dishes and my favorite thing is cook for my parents after working
hard
.
However
, the household chore that I don't want to do is sweep the yard. My yard is quite large and sweeping is
very
tiring and I spend too much time sweeping the yard. Housework is
really
fun although there are
some
things I don't like,
but
I'm happy that I can
reduce
the pressure on you.
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IELTS essay Write about a chore you like and a chore you dislike the most and why

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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