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the pros and cons of living in a large city

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From my point of view, living in a big city has 3 advantages. The first advantage is facilities. A city has many modern facilities for education, medical, transportation, . . . If we are sick, we can go to the best hospital. Second, job opportunities in the city have more than in the countryside. It means that people have a better quality of life. Living in a big city, you can communicate with many people and learn about different cultures from them. Third, a big city has plenty of entertainment. There are many recreations such as parks, museums, shopping malls. But in my opinion, living in a big city will still have disadvantages. To begin with, the disadvantage is overcrowding. At the same time, it is dangerous because of the cars. Moreover, maybe happen traffic jams. Although it is a modern site, it causes noise pollution, air pollution. The cost of living in big cities is much higher than in the countryside. . . However, I love city life. I hate peace, it makes me feel alone.
From my point of view,
living
in a
big
city has 3 advantages. The
first
advantage is facilities. A city has
many
modern facilities for education, medical, transportation
, .
.
.
If we are sick, we can go to the best hospital. Second, job opportunities in the city have more than in the countryside. It means that
people
have a better quality of life.
Living
in a
big
city, you can communicate with
many
people
and learn about
different
cultures from them. Third, a
big
city has
plenty
of entertainment. There are
many
recreations such as parks, museums, shopping malls.
But
in my opinion,
living
in a
big
city will
still
have disadvantages. To
begin
with, the disadvantage is overcrowding. At the same time, it is
dangerous
because
of the cars.
Moreover
, maybe happen traffic jams. Although it is a modern site, it causes noise pollution, air pollution. The cost of
living
in
big
cities
is much higher than in the countryside.
.
.
However
, I
love
city life. I hate peace, it
makes
me feel alone.
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IELTS essay the pros and cons of living in a large city

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