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the given pictorial image reveals information about differences in zhabeli high school in 1990 and 2010. Comparisons are related to all school property. Overall, it can be seen that a remarkable changes were made in 2010 compared to 1990. One of them was to add private property after 10 years. In addition to 3 types of labs has taken place instead of 1 as well as numbers of trees are also found to be increased. Talking about 1990 school comprised of gym which in 2010 remained intact in corner of the school where classroom was also added next to it. Moreover numerous trees were planted near by school property in 2010. With respect to classrooms in 1990 school had 4 rooms which was decreased by 2 but expanded in terms of space where wifi too was placed in 2010. After that there were 3 science labs that removed by biology lab, chemistry lab, and physics lab in 2010 still canteen and library area remained same as before. With regards to boarding school which was removed after decades and private properties like apartments, shops, rain water tank, recycling zone owed region. Another point is to be noted that basketball court was prolifarated in 4 region that was reduced by 2 in 2010.

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given
 pictorial image reveals information about differences in Possible spelling mistake found.Shebeli
zhabeli
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school
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school
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seen
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changes
were made
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add
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 to 3 types of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworkshop
labs
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 of 1 as well
 as numbers of trees are also
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.

Talking about 1990 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 comprised of gym which in 2010 remained intact in corner of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 where classroom was also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
next
 to it. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 numerous trees were planted
Did you mean "nearby"?nearby
near by
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school
 property in 2010. With respect to classrooms in 1990 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 had 4 rooms which was decreased
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but
 expanded in terms of space where Did you mean "Wi-Fi"? (This is the officially approved term by the Wi-Fi Alliance.)Wi-Fi
wifi
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 in 2010. After that there were 3 science You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworkshop
labs
 that removed by biology You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworkshop
lab
, chemistry You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworkshop
lab
, and physics You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworkshop
lab
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 canteen and library area remained same as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".In regard toWith regard toRegarding
With regards to
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school
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 after decades and private properties like apartments, shops, rain water tank, recycling zone owed region. Another point is to be noted
 that basketball court was Possible spelling mistake found.proliferated
prolifarated
 in 4 Possible agreement error. The noun 'region' seems to be countable, so consider using: "regions".regions
region
 that was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 by 2 in 2010. 