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advantages and disadvantages single partents

advantages and disadvantages single partents 73E13
Single-parent family brings many advantages. First, single parents will have a free life. They can make their own decisions without having to ask others. In addition, arguments decrease, so they can avoid toxic relationships. Otherwise, dramatic quarrels between parents can exert a negative impact on children’s psychology and behavior. Single parents easily understand their children’s aspirations and share, encourage them. For example, they spend their free time teaching their children to study, taking them out to watch movies, go shopping… Besides, children also benefit from a single family. Because they lack love from one parent, they have to learn to be independent. Children must be self-disciplined in daily activities, personal hygiene, and study because their dad or mum has to work hard and do not have enough time to take care of them. In conclusion, a single-parent family is not a bad thing and it has a lot of positive sides. We should get rid of bad stereotypes about it.
Single-parent family brings
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many
advantages.
First
, single
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parents
will have a free life. They can
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make
their
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own
decisions without having to ask others.
In addition
, arguments decrease,
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so
they can avoid toxic relationships.
Otherwise
, dramatic quarrels between
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parents
can exert a
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negative
impact on
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children’s
psychology and behavior. Single
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parents
easily
understand their
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children’s
aspirations and share, encourage them.
For example
, they spend their free time teaching their
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children
to study, taking them out to
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watch
movies, go shopping…
Besides
,
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children
also
benefit from a single family.
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Because
they lack
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love
from one
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parent
, they
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have to
learn to be independent.
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Children
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must
be self-disciplined in daily activities, personal hygiene, and study
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because
their dad or mum
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has to
work
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hard
and do not have
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enough
time to take care of them.
In conclusion
, a single-parent family is not a
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bad
thing and it has
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a lot of
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positive
sides. We should
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get
rid of
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bad
stereotypes about it.
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IELTS essay advantages and disadvantages single partents

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
160 words
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