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Transport is important or not

Transport is important or not DwAgj

Cars plays a important rule in human life If we human wants to travel we generally use the car for comfortable journey but on the another hand the use of cars is dangerous for our environment it efforts our globalisation. Nowadays people use cars for long drives, travel, for shopping and for emergencies but we should not use the cars too much we should use public transport for clean and green cities

Possible agreement error. You should probably use: "car plays".Car plays
Cars plays
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 in human life If It seems that a verb or adverb is missing or misspelled here. Please verify.
we human
 wants to travel we generally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 for comfortable journey This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 on the another hand the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 for our environment Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'it'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
it efforts
 our Possible spelling mistake. 'globalisation' is British English.globalization
globalisation
. Nowadays This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 for long drives, travel, for shopping and for emergencies This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we should not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 too much we should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 public transport for clean and green Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphcities.cities!cities?cities:cities,cities;
cities