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I want to become a mechanic. I need meet computer programmer, my computer is have problems. If you want too buy something, you should meet salesperson. This flight attendant is good. I like a artist. I want to be an architect.

I want to become a mechanic. I need meet computer programmer, my computer is have problems. If you want too buy something, you should meet salesperson. This flight attendant is good. I like a artist. I want to be an architect. 1A6ey
I want to become a mechanic. I need meet computer programmer, my computer is have problems. If you want too buy something, you should meet salesperson. This flight attendant is good. I like a artist. I want to be an architect. I want to become a mechanic. I need meet computer programmer, my computer is have problems. If you want too buy something, you should meet salesperson. This flight attendant is good. I like a artist. I want to be an architect.
I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to become a mechanic. I need
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
computer programmer, my computer is have problems. If you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
too
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
something, you should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
salesperson. This flight attendant is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
.

I like
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
artist. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to be an architect.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to become a mechanic.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
need
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
computer programmer, my computer is have problems. If you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
too
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
something, you should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
salesperson. This flight attendant is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
.

I like
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
artist. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to be an architect.
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IELTS essay I want to become a mechanic. I need meet computer programmer, my computer is have problems. If you want too buy something, you should meet salesperson. This flight attendant is good. I like a artist. I want to be an architect.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
82 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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