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D: A long time ago, there was a kingdom called “Jetshikar”. In this empire, everyone knew the statue called “Quilsern” which was created by their ancestors and handed down from generation to generation. In addition, this sculpture was made from numerous gems, such as diamond, garnet, jade, opal, quartz, spinel, and topaz. Also, citizens here believed that it brought good luck and bountiful crops. But one day, when the entire empire was having a party to celebrate the 70th birthday of the king, there was a black cat that sneaked into the castle. It’s Kar Bee’s cat. He is the enemy of this kingdom. Then, the cat got into the storage room and stole the statue. P: Later that night, everyone panicked when they realized that the statuette had been stolen. Meanwhile, the cat arrived at Miq Foq cave where Kar Bee lived and that was the last ingredient to create Nuen Chong - a poison that can make everyone listen to every single of his commands, but it needs 10 days to be activated. P: The next day, in Jetshikar, they decided who would go into the woods where Kar Bee lived. And prince Pruen was chosen because he is the best explorer, also, he is good at archery so he was believed to come home safely. Later in the afternoon, he started his journey with a cute backpack that contained a compass, a box of matches, some food, and a sword. D: In the first days, he went through some bushes and followed the trail. Everything was very peaceful but on the evening of the 6th day, when he almost arrived at Miq Foq cave, he got very tired and thus, sat under a tree to take some rest. Just then, he saw a massive angry tiger coming out of the bushes and moving forward towards him. The prince was petrified and the tiger almost ate him. Suddenly, a bear came and rescued the prince after fighting with the tiger. After that, the bear and the prince fell asleep. D: The next day, Pruen awoke and continued his journey with the bear because, last night, the bear told him that he had been taken captive in Miq Fog by Kar Bee because that wizard needed to test his witchcraft, so from a man he transformed to a bear. P: When Nuen Chong was almost completed to activate, the prince and the bear arrived at the cave. Then, they quietly sneaked into the cave, like how the black cat was stealing. Even, they must hold their breath for not to be caught. That plan was very successful but they didn’t expect that this house had a small amount of N2O gas which would make you laugh. Unfortunately, because of nitrous oxide, they laughed and got caught. Kar Bee was extremely displeased and locked them in cages. When they were so depressed because of the failing plan, Pruen had an idea, that was calling Winx princesses to rescue them. While Bee was calculating the amount of solution needed for 234 176 people, Winx princesses appeared and rescued the prince. The wizard was shocked, but soonly after, he stood up and fought with them. At the beginning of the battle, Pruen and his friends had advantages because there were more people. But Kar Bee used “Torch” - a very powerful spell, so Pruen, princesses were injured. Bee thought he had won. He returned to the cauldron, and counted “10, 9, 8, . . . . . . . . . . . ”. Everyone else seemed so stressed and worried. When Bee said “3, 2, 1”, the tiger that the bear had won returned because he was very grateful for the advice that the bear gave him after the battle. That tiger threw a stick into the cauldron, and the poison was ruined before he put “Quinsern” in. Bee was so furious, he almost killed all of them but he was defeated by the bear the moment that he was reading the spell. D: After that, Bee was seriously injured and all curses were broken, the bear returned to human shape. And they, Pruen and Nun Dag-the real name of the bear returned the statue to the castle. Everyone was cheering when they got back after 10 days. Suddenly, Nun Dag kneeling to propose to Pruen, because of falling in love with Nun Dag, at first sight, Pruen said “Yes”. So, they lived happily with each other ever after and they adopted a child at an orphanage to make her feel happy to live in a family. And if you ask where Bee was after the fight, he went to a pagoda to cultivate his virtues.
D: A long time ago, there was a kingdom called “
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Jetshikar
”. In this empire,
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everyone
knew the statue called “
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Quilsern
” which
was created
by their ancestors and handed down from generation to generation.
In addition
, this sculpture
was made
from numerous gems, such as diamond, garnet, jade, opal, quartz, spinel, and topaz.
Also
, citizens here believed that it brought
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good
luck and bountiful crops.
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But
one day, when the entire empire was having a party to celebrate the 70th birthday of the king, there was a black cat that sneaked into the castle. It’s
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Kar
Bee’s cat. He is the enemy of this kingdom. Then, the cat
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got
into the storage room and stole the statue.

P: Later that night,
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everyone
panicked when they realized that the statuette had
been stolen
. Meanwhile, the cat arrived at
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Miq
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Foq
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cave
where
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Kar
Bee
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lived
and that was the last ingredient to create
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Nuen
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Chong
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-
a poison that can
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make
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everyone
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listen
to every single of his commands,
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but
it needs 10 days to
be activated
.

P: The
next
day, in
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Jetshikar
, they decided who would go into the woods where
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Kar
Bee
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lived
. And prince
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Pruen
was chosen
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because
he is the best explorer,
also
, he is
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good
at archery
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so
he
was believed
to
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come
home
safely
. Later in the afternoon, he
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started
his journey with a cute backpack that contained a compass, a box of matches,
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some
food, and a sword.

D: In the
first
days, he went through
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some
bushes and followed the trail. Everything was
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very
peaceful
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but
on the evening of the 6th day, when he
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almost
arrived at
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Miq
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Foq
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cave
, he
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got
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very
tired and
thus
, sat under a tree to take
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some
rest.
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Just
then, he
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saw
a massive angry
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tiger
coming out of the bushes and moving forward towards him. The prince
was petrified
and the
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tiger
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almost
ate him.
Suddenly
, a
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bear
came and rescued the prince after fighting with the
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tiger
. After that, the
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bear
and the prince fell asleep.

D: The
next
day,
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Pruen
awoke and continued his journey with the
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bear
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because
, last night, the
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bear
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told
him that he had
been taken
captive in
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Miq
Fog by
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Kar
Bee
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because
that wizard needed to
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test
his witchcraft,
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so
from a
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man
he transformed to a bear.

P: When
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Nuen
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Chong
was
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almost
completed to activate, the prince and the
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bear
arrived at the
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cave
. Then, they
quietly
sneaked into the
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cave
, like how the black cat was stealing. Even, they
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must
hold their breath for not to
be caught
. That plan was
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very
successful
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but
they didn’t
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expect
that this
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house
had a
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small
amount of N2O gas which would
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make
you laugh. Unfortunately,
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because
of nitrous oxide, they laughed and
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got
caught.
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Kar
Bee was
extremely
displeased and locked them in cages. When they were
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so
depressed
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because
of the failing plan,
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Pruen
had an
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idea
, that was calling
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Winx
princesses to rescue them. While Bee was calculating the amount of solution needed for 234 176
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people
,
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Winx
princesses appeared and rescued the prince. The wizard
was shocked
,
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but
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soonly
after, he stood up and fought with them. At the beginning of the battle,
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Pruen
and his friends had advantages
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because
there were more
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people
.
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But
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Kar
Bee
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used
“Torch”
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-
a
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very
powerful spell,
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so
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Pruen
, princesses
were injured
. Bee
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thought
he had won. He returned to the cauldron, and counted “10, 9, 8
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”.
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Everyone
else seemed
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so
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stressed
and worried. When Bee said “3, 2, 1”, the
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tiger
that the
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bear
had won returned
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because
he was
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very
grateful for the advice that the
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bear
gave him after the battle. That
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tiger
threw a stick into the cauldron, and the poison
was ruined
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before
he put “
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Quinsern
” in. Bee was
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so
furious, he
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almost
killed all of them
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but
he
was defeated
by the
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bear
the moment that he was reading the spell.

D: After that, Bee was
seriously
injured and all curses
were broken
, the
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bear
returned to human shape. And they,
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Pruen
and Nun Dag-the real name of the
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bear
returned the statue to the castle.
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Everyone
was cheering when they
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got
back after 10 days.
Suddenly
, Nun Dag kneeling to propose to
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Pruen
,
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because
of falling in
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love
with Nun Dag, at
first
sight,
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Pruen
said “Yes”.
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So
, they
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lived
happily
with each other ever
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after and
they adopted a child at an orphanage to
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make
her feel happy to
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live
in a family. And if you ask where Bee was after the fight, he went to a pagoda to cultivate his virtues.
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IELTS essay Write a story about anything you can imagine

Essay
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7 paragraphs
785 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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