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Write a short story (at least 80 words) describing an experience that you had.

Write a short story (at least 80 words) describing an experience that you had. 8G7br

When I was 11 years old, I and my family went to the beach in Binh Hung. It was a great idea when we chose to go on that day because the weather was sunny and cloudy. After about 2 hours, we finally got there, the coconut tree was standing, and it shook as a waving to me. Then I started to arrange luggage and prepared to swim. I was standing and took a look around. I saw a game, which was on the beach, the name "Playing banana float". I was interested in that game so I called my mom also my family to play it. Next, they agreed so I can play. At the moment, I climbed on the float, so I was a bit afraid but when I got there and the leader started to run it, it was so interesting and really fun. There was around me by water and just water. Then, we went around and saw some things interesting. Finally, out of time so the leader took us back to the sand. It was the great trip that I have ever been to. I hope that I can visit and enjoy that game again.

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old
, I and my family went to the beach in Possible spelling mistake found.BinBindBinsBIHBINBMNH
Binh
 Hung. It was a great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 when we chose to go on that day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the weather was sunny and cloudy.

After about 2 hours, we finally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 there, the coconut tree was standing, and it shook as a waving to me. Then I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to arrange luggage and prepared to swim. I was standing and took a look around. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a game, which was on the beach, the name Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
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Playing banana floatUse a smart closing quote here: "”".”
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. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was interested
 in that game This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I called my mom also
 my family to play it. Next
, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
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so
 I can play. At the moment, I climbed on the float, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I was a bit afraid This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 there and the leader This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to run it, it was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 interesting and really
 fun. There was around me by water and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 water. Then, we went around and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 things interesting.

Finally
, out of time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the leader took us back to the sand. It was the great trip that I have ever been to. I hope that I can visit and enjoy that game again. 