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Write a short paragraph to share ways to keep fit

Write a short paragraph to share ways to keep fit p1oKd
When you do keep fit you need: Frist, you need to drink a lot of water because the human body is 80% water. When you drink water, you will feel full and do not want to eat much. You have detox for your body when you drink a lot of water. Then, you should exercise, when you do this, you are not scared to lose weight or put on weight. Exercise helps you keep a beautiful and healthy body. Example: you play tennis about 30 minutes burn 232 calo or swimming burn 286 calo/30 minutes. . . Finally, you shouldn't drink medicine put on or lost weight because it has bad for your health. You shouldn't eat fast foods or drinks water gas, because It help you faster.
When you do
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keep
fit you need:
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, you need to
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a lot of
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water
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because
the human body is 80%
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water
. When you
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drink
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water
, you will feel full and do not want to eat much. You have
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detox
for your body when you
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drink
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a lot of
water.

Then, you should exercise, when you do this, you are not scared to lose weight or put on weight. Exercise
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helps
you
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keep
a
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beautiful
and healthy body. Example: you play tennis about 30 minutes burn 232
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calo
or swimming burn 286
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calo
/30 minutes.
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Finally
, you shouldn't
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drink
medicine put on or lost weight
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because
it has
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bad
for your health. You shouldn't eat
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fast
foods or
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drinks
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water
gas,
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because
It
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you faster.
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IELTS essay Write a short paragraph to share ways to keep fit

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
128 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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