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The image depicts the importance of a stopbank and how it can protect the areas where there is a probability of increased floods. Overall, without the construction of a barrier, incase of any water calamity, there are high chances of water raising to a dangerous level near human dwellings which can become an issue of concern whereas the best solution for this is a bank that prevents excess fluid entering from any given river or drain. Firstly, the liquid in the river is taken to have increased to a 100-year flood level and without the existence of a stopbank, this liquid flows freely towards buildings in that area, even though they are raised, they have a heavy chance of getting affected as there will only be a freeboard level of 300mm which is quiet less and is dangerous to have under one's home. However, this issue can be addressed efficiently if there is a construction of a stopbank with a berm and a floodgate, near the drains that are present as this bank can accomadate the freeboard and chanel water which results in lesser amount of water bombarding into housing areas in case of a flood. Even though, a little amount of liquid escapes, it will form a internal ponding area below the residence. Although, internal runoff can also account for water that accumulates under a building, it would not be a matter of concern.
The image depicts the importance of a
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stopbank
and how it can protect the
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areas
where there is a probability of increased floods.

Overall
, without the construction of a barrier,
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incase of
any
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water
calamity, there are high chances of
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water
raising to a
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dangerous
level near human dwellings which can become an issue of concern whereas the best solution for this is a bank that
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prevents
excess fluid entering from any
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given
river or drain.

Firstly
, the liquid in the river
is taken
to have increased to a 100-year flood level and without the existence of a
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stopbank
, this liquid flows
freely
towards buildings in that
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area
,
even though
they
are raised
, they have a heavy chance of getting
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affected
as there will
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only
be a freeboard level of
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300mm
which is
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quiet
less and is
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dangerous
to have under one's home.

However
, this issue can
be addressed
efficiently
if there is a construction of a
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stopbank
with a berm and a floodgate, near the drains that are present as this bank can
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accomadate
the freeboard and
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chanel
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water
which results in lesser amount of
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water
bombarding into housing
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areas
in case of a flood.
Even though
, a
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little
amount of liquid escapes, it will form
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a
internal
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ponding
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area
below the residence. Although, internal runoff can
also
account for
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water
that accumulates under a building, it would not be a matter of concern.
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IELTS essay stopbank and its uses with images

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
235 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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