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Write a short paragraph hof about 150 words about advantages of living in a big city.

Write a short paragraph hof about 150 words about advantages of living in a big city. q1L7w
There are many advantages of living in a big city. If you live in big city, your children can go to schools with good conditions. In big city, there are also good hospitals so your parent can go there if they have trouble with health. At the weekend, your children can go to park, go to cinema or go to favorite restaurants, for example Korean restaurant, Japan restaurant. Your wife can go shopping in favorite shop. In big city, you can transport by taxi or grab which small city often don't have or difficult to get.
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your parent can go there if they have trouble with health. At the weekend, your children can go to park, go to cinema or go to favorite restaurants,
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Korean restaurant, Japan restaurant. Your wife can go shopping in favorite shop. In
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city, you can transport by taxi or grab which
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IELTS essay Write a short paragraph hof about 150 words about advantages of living in a big city.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
96 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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