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world would be at greater place if women should lead the society. to what extend do you agree or disagree.

world would be at greater place if women should lead the society. BLMm6

nowadays, female ought to take the initial for doing any type of work. this scenario has continue to grow in the society. hence it is a great step to improve the level of society. i completely agrre with this statement because of some useful points whicvh i going to share with go in the upcoming paragraphs. to embark on, the first and the foremost benefits of leading a society by women is that. she can easily handle all the herculean task according to the situation of every women. in the household works female gender work efficiently.

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, female ought to take the initial for doing any type of work. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThis
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continue
 to grow in the society. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?hence,
hence
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improve
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some
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herculean
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