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world would be at greater place if women should lead the society. to what extend do you agree or disagree.

world would be at greater place if women should lead the society. BLMm6
nowadays, female ought to take the initial for doing any type of work. this scenario has continue to grow in the society. hence it is a great step to improve the level of society. i completely agrre with this statement because of some useful points whicvh i going to share with go in the upcoming paragraphs. to embark on, the first and the foremost benefits of leading a society by women is that. she can easily handle all the herculean task according to the situation of every women. in the household works female gender work efficiently.
nowadays
, female ought to take the initial for doing any type of work.
this
scenario has
continue
to grow in the society.
hence
it is a great step to
improve
the level of society.
i
completely
agrre
with this statement
because
of
some
useful points
whicvh
i
going to share with go in the upcoming paragraphs.
to
embark on, the
first
and the foremost benefits of leading a society by women is that.
she
can
easily
handle all the
herculean
task according to the situation of every
women
.
in
the household works female gender work
efficiently
.
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IELTS essay world would be at greater place if women should lead the society.

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