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Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world,but not agree that this is beneficial ,do the benefits of globalisation outweight the drawbacks ?

Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world, but not agree that this is beneficial, do the benefits of globalisation outweight the drawbacks? m826q

In this day and age, majority of individuals agree that world has become interconnected, a few people believes that such a globalised world has plethora downsides. In my opinion, unified world has more merits. My preference is explained further. There are numerous of benefits of living in a globalised world, the formost one is that it leads to progress of nation in every sectors. To explain this, as a country indulge in trade and commerce of various commodities, there is economic growth for all of them due to network word. To add to this, technological advancements of one part can be use in other part as well. For instance, companies in us have outsource customers support to call center in India as there is technology sharing. Furthermore, there are better relation among people of different countries. As they interact with each other, they learn about different cultures. This mostly happens through social medias such as Instagram, Facebook, WhatsApp or through communication at work places. This makes people more open minded, consequently they would easily accept other style of living. On the contrary, there some demerits linked with globalization. To commence with, the culture may face degradation. The indigenous way of living may get extinct. by this means dressing sense, eating habits, music, languages, customs, as a result of adopting new culture. In conclusion, globalization is a trend and will stay throughout the 21st century. Although there are some adverse impacts of it. the positive outweighs devastating effects. The growth of nation and the cultural exchange that take place across the globe are the main reasons due to which i favour it

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majority of
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agree
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world
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people
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believes
 that such a Possible spelling mistake. 'globalised' is British English.globalized
globalised
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world
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explained
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. There are numerous of benefits of living in a Possible spelling mistake. 'globalised' is British English.globalized
globalised
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world
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formost
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sectors
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explain
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add
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use
 in other part as well
. For instance
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companies
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outsource
 customers support to call center in India as there is technology sharing. Furthermore
, there are better relation among This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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different
 countries. As they interact with each other, they learn about This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 cultures. This mostly
 happens through social medias such as Instagram, Facebook, WhatsApp or through communication at work places. Did you mean "these"?These
This
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makes
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people
 more This word is normally spelled with hyphen.open-minded
open minded
, consequently
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some
 demerits linked with globalization. To commence with, the culture may face degradation. The indigenous way of living may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 extinct. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBy
by
 this means dressing sense, eating habits, music, languages, customs, as a result
 of adopting new culture. In conclusion
, globalization is a trend and will stay throughout the 21st century. “Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 adverse impacts of it. the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 outweighs devastating effects. The growth of nation and the cultural exchange that take place across the globe are the main reasons due to which Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
favour
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