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Write a short paragraph about your favourite animal

Write a short paragraph about your favourite animal 3Ljll

In all of animals, I love birds. There are many birds in nature. Birds a lot of fur and they have wings. They have many sizes from small to large. Birds can fly but some of them don't. They eat worms and seeds or fruits. In spring, they live in the north and in the winter they migrate south. They live in packs in the sky or branch of a tree. The birds give so much benefits for humans. They catch worms without damaging, harvest off crops for helping famer. They have great voice to help relaxing and decrease stress. In the future, I want to raise a bird. I love it.

In Consider using "all animals" or "all of the animals".all animalsall of the animals
all of animals
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfowl
birds
. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfowl
birds
 in nature. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfowl
Birds
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 fur and they have wings. They have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 sizes from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 to large. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfowl
Birds
 can fly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of them don't. They eat worms and seeds or fruits. In spring, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in the north and in the winter they migrate south. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in packs in the sky or branch of a tree. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfowl
birds
 give This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Use "many" with countable nouns.many
much
 benefits for humans. They catch worms without damaging, harvest off crops for helping Possible spelling mistake found.famefamedfarmerFarmergamertamer
famer
. They have great voice to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
The verb 'help' is used with an infinitive: "to relax" or "relax".to relaxrelax
relaxing
 and decrease This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
. In the future, I want to raise a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfowl
bird
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 it. 