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Village and The City Life

Village and The City Life 7Ljwy
Village and city life both have their own life styles. Both have some negative and positive aspects. people of villages are called villager and people of city are called citizens. First of all village life is Healthier and natural life. villager meet their needs from natural resources like if they want to cook their food and they need fire Firstly they will collect wood and then they put on fire. it take time but its not harmful for nature. Even they are healthier because if they want to go anywhere they do not go on bike or car they just reach there location by walking. Village atmosphere is pollution free because they use natural resources like wood or other things. Noise pollution is also less because they don't use man made vehicles. Now if we talk about City or city life. It is much noisier then village life. People of city is less healthier because they eat or drink admixture things. Cities are polluted because they use man made machines or things. Specially those things that produces harmful and Dangerous Gasses like Carbon monoxide. people of cities also use there vehicle instead of walking. In everyone's thought village life is better then city life. But in my views both are good at there places. Nothing is good or bad itself the way of using it make it good or bad. For Example if someone is using mobile phone for his study then its good. if someone is using mobile for watching sexual videos then it's bad. See mobile is not good or bad the way of using it makr it good or bad.
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Village
and city
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life
both have their
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own
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life
styles. Both have
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some
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negative
and
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aspects.
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people
of
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villages
are called
villager and
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people
of city
are called
citizens.
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First of all
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village
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life
is Healthier and natural
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life
.
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villager
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meet
their needs from natural resources like if they want to cook their
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food and
they need fire
Firstly
they will collect
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wood and
then they put on fire.
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it
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take
time
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but
its not harmful for nature. Even they are healthier
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because
if they want to go anywhere they do not go on bike or car they
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just
reach there location by walking.
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Village
atmosphere is pollution free
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because
they
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use
natural resources like wood or other things. Noise pollution is
also
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because
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use
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man
made vehicles.
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Now
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life
. It is much noisier
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then
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village
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life
.
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People
of city is
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less healthier
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because
they eat or drink admixture things.
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Cities
are polluted
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because
they
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use
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man
made machines or things.
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those things that produces harmful and
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Dangerous
Gasses like Carbon monoxide.
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people
of
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cities
also
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use
there vehicle
instead
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thought
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village
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at
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places. Nothing is
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bad
itself the way of using it
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make
it
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good
or
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bad
.
For Example
if someone is using mobile phone for his study then its
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good
.
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if
someone is using mobile for watching sexual videos then it's
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bad
.
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See
mobile is not
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or
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the way of using it
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it
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IELTS essay Village and The City Life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
273 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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