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For vegetarians and against vegetarian

For vegetarians and against vegetarian d92bd
It has been observed that demand of food has been increasing worldwide due to enhance population. One set of people prefer to become vegetarian; however, others oppose that they like to eat non-veg. Further paragraphs will be discussed towards both the aspects. To embark with, it is undeniable that there are plenty of reasons why lots of public select vegetables to eat. One of the most fundamental cause is that to obey moral velues. To elaborate, many religions do not allow to eat food which is made by kill animals as these activities against their religion for this, they tend to eat vege -food. Moreover, organic foods are more healthy compare to non-veg. By this I mean vegetables also provide source of nutrition which is needed by everyone such as protein, calcium, vitamin from green vegetables, nuts and seeds and so on, as well as it is also healthy food to protect from various disease and to keep fit body. On the other hand, more and more individuals eat food which is produced by animals. The first reason is increasing populace of world. Food is necessary every one life to survive in the world, so it leads to scarcity of vegetable foods that's why people divert to eat die animals. secondly, many societies believe that it doesn't provide proper nutrition from veg foods compare to eat non-veg food. Apart from that it maintains food cycle of nature. To sum up, both arguments have their own benefits. moral values, healthy, easily available, to produce our farm these are advantages of veg diet, while for non- veg, decrease shortage of foods, maintain balance diet and food cycle
It has
been observed
that demand of
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food
has been increasing worldwide due to enhance population. One set of
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people
prefer to become vegetarian;
however
, others oppose that they like to
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eat
non-veg.
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Further
paragraphs will
be discussed
towards both the aspects.

To embark with, it is undeniable that there are
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plenty
of reasons why lots of public select
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vegetables
to
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eat
. One of the most fundamental
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cause
is that to obey moral
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velues
. To elaborate,
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many
religions do not
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allow
to
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eat
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food
which
is made
by kill animals as these activities against their religion for this, they tend to
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eat
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vege
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-food
.
Moreover
, organic
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foods
are more healthy compare to non-veg. By this I mean
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vegetables
also
provide source of nutrition which
is needed
by everyone such as protein, calcium, vitamin from green
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vegetables
, nuts and seeds and
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so
on,
as well
as it is
also
healthy
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food
to protect from various disease and to
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keep
fit body.

On the other hand
, more and more individuals
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eat
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food
which
is produced
by animals. The
first
reason is increasing populace of world.
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Food
is necessary every one life to survive in the world,
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so
it leads to scarcity of
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vegetable
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foods
that's why
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people
divert to
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eat
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die
animals.
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secondly
,
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many
societies believe that it doesn't provide proper nutrition from veg
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foods
compare to
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eat
non-veg
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food
. Apart from that it maintains
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food
cycle of nature.

To sum up, both arguments have their
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own
benefits.
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moral
values, healthy,
easily
available, to produce our farm these are advantages of veg diet, while for non- veg, decrease shortage of
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foods
, maintain balance diet and
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food
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cycle
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IELTS essay For vegetarians and against vegetarian

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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