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write a short paragraph about the pollution types their neighborhood faces

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The types of pollution that my neighborhood faces aren't an excessive amount of but it annoys me a small amount. It's noise pollution. Where I live is near the most road so there is plenty vehicles making noise. There's also air pollution. There are some old people in my neighborhood who sometimes burn dried leaves. These kinds of pollution happen almost everyday consquently I got accustomed with them.
The types of
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that my neighborhood faces aren't an excessive amount of
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but
it annoys me a
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small
amount. It's noise
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pollution
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Where
I
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live
is near the most road
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so
there is
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plenty
vehicles making noise. There's
also
air
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pollution
. There are
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some
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old
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people
in my neighborhood who
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sometimes
burn dried
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leaves
. These kinds of
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pollution
happen almost
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everyday
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consquently
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got
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them.
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IELTS essay write a short paragraph about the pollution types their neighborhood faces

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
68 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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