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Write a review of a film you have seen, saying why you did or did not enjoy it and whether or not would you recommend it to others

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When I was young, I had a chance to go to the movies and watch a series of films called Harry Potter. The series has 7 parts and I watched the third one: Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire. It’s a classic movie that everyone loves. It was the highlight of my childhood. Watching it again brought back the excitement of a magical world that I always wish existed. It seemed logical at the time not to start from the first of the series – that would be a moment where I question my logic, however, it was still as enjoyable as the first. I loved the number of activities going on in the movie; it also progressed into this magical world we knew little about, so we find out more than we previously may not have even thought about. Unless you read the books as I did. That moment of excitement to actually be able to visualize the Goblet of Fire is something that can only be described by true Harry Potter fans. I realized while watching the movie that it never occurred to me that there would be other magic schools other than Hogwarts. The moment of awe was something I enjoy experiencing repetitively each time I come across the Harry Potter series. However, I felt a bit disappointed because I had to wait for such a long time (nearly two years) to be able to watch the next part of the film. Nevertheless, it will always be a movie that I wouldn’t mind re-watching countless times. I would recommend this film to those who want to experience a magic world. I believe that you will never feel regretful when you watch it.
When I was young, I had a chance to go to the
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of films called Harry Potter. The
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has 7 parts and I
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the third one: Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire. It’s a classic
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that everyone
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loves
. It was the highlight of my childhood. Watching it again brought back the excitement of a magical world that I always wish existed.

It seemed logical at the time not to
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start
from the
first
of the
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, it was
still
as enjoyable as the
first
. I
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the number of activities going on in the
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; it
also
progressed into this magical world we knew
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little
about,
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we find out more than we previously may not have even
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about. Unless you read the books as I did. That moment of excitement to actually be able to visualize the Goblet of Fire is something that can
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only
be
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described
by true Harry Potter fans.

I realized while watching the
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that it never occurred to me that there would be other magic schools other than Hogwarts. The moment of awe was something I enjoy experiencing
repetitively
each time I
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come
across the Harry Potter
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series
.
However
, I felt a bit disappointed
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I had to wait for such a long time (
nearly
two years) to be able to
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watch
the
next
part of the film.
Nevertheless
, it will always be a
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movie
that I wouldn’t mind re-watching countless times.

I would recommend this film to those who want to experience a magic world. I believe that you will never feel regretful when you
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it.

IELTS essay Write a review of a film you have seen, saying why you did or did not enjoy it and whether or not would you recommend it to others

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4 paragraphs
286 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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