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What would you do if you were teleported?

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if I could teleport, I would go to Cuba firstly. Cuba is my dream country because it has lived many war, but despite this people live in Cuba are always happy and energetic. Moreover, Cuba has colorful culture and the happy streets. After I go to my dream country, I want to do some economic things. I would go country where is good hourly wage. This country bring income and then I would spend for my family in my country. After then some economic things I want aqcuire knowledge about other culture or people. Each person in the world adds knowledge to me. I would like to meet many people with teleport and increase my awareness.

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 I could teleport, I would go to Cuba firstly
. Cuba is my dream You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
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 in Cuba are always happy and energetic. Moreover
, Cuba has colorful culture and the happy streets. After I go to my dream You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
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 economic things. I would go You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
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good
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country
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country
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 knowledge about other culture or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 knowledge to me. I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
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many
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 with teleport and increase my awareness. 