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write a paragraph(80-100words) about the kind of volunteer work you like to do.

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The volunteer is one of the popular activities in all countries of the world such as helping poor people, cleaning streets. . . But in my country, I have taken part in protecting the environment. For example, we cleaned the roads and collected recyclable things. Firstly, I am fond of working with children and I’m sympathetic with the kids there because of their disabilities. Secondly, I just want to help people in need because it’s a good chance to help kids who are less lucky than me. And I can also improve myself like I can organize many extracurricular activities. I’m also patient and good at explaining things. Thirdly, volunteering builds a strong relationship among humans. It is easy to make friends with the same hobbies and purpose. Being a student, let’s study hard to build a better nation and help the country escape poverty.
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, we cleaned the roads and collected recyclable things.
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with children and I’m sympathetic with the kids there
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help
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people
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because
it’s a
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good
chance to
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help
kids who are less lucky than me. And I can
also
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improve
myself like I can organize
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many
extracurricular activities. I’m
also
patient and
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good
at explaining things.
Thirdly
, volunteering builds a strong relationship among humans. It is easy to
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make
friends with the same hobbies and purpose. Being a student,
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let
’s study
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hard
to build a better nation and
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help
the country escape poverty.

IELTS essay write a paragraph(80-100words) about the kind of volunteer work you like to do.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
145 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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