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write a paragraph to discuss about the role of hope in life

write a paragraph to discuss about the role of hope in life okkrD
In the poem "Hope is the thing with feathers" by Emily Dickinson, suffering is an important idea in emphasizing the role and power of hope. In the poem, the suffering is clearly expressed through the image of a small bird in the sky having to overcome many difficulties and challenges such as gale, storm, chillest land, strangest sea. Although it is only a small bird, it can still overcome obstacles, harsh weather, still stay healthy, and show its strength. The image of a small bird is a metaphor for hope, which gives us strength and motivation to overcome all difficulties and challenges, and the harshest situations of life. In life, people will face a number of challenges, and what they need is hope, hope will help them through all. Especially in terms of health difficulties, hope is the spiritual medicine to help them overcome diseases. In fact, I have suffered from asthma since childhood, but with an optimistic spirit, full of hope for good health, I will be able to overcome my illness. Therefore, no matter how difficult life is or encounters too many challenges, everyone should always have hope to overcome everything.
In the poem
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Hope is the thing with feathers
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by Emily Dickinson, suffering is an
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important
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idea
in emphasizing the role and power of
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hope
. In the poem, the suffering is
clearly
expressed through the image of a
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small
bird in the sky having to overcome
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many
difficulties and
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challenges
such as gale, storm,
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chillest
land,
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strangest
sea. Although it is
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only
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bird, it can
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stay healthy, and
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show
its strength. The image of a
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small
bird is a metaphor for
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hope
, which gives us strength and motivation to overcome all difficulties and
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challenges
, and the harshest situations of life. In life,
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people
will face a number of
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challenges
, and what they need is
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hope
,
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hope
will
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help
them through all.
Especially
in terms of health difficulties,
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hope
is the spiritual medicine to
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help
them overcome diseases. In fact, I have suffered from asthma since childhood,
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but
with an optimistic spirit, full of
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hope
for
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good
health, I will be able to overcome my illness.
Therefore
, no matter how difficult life is or encounters too
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many
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challenges
, everyone should always have
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hope
to overcome everything.
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IELTS essay write a paragraph to discuss about the role of hope in life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
193 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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