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language and thougts in human nature

language and thougts in human nature Kll99
Sometimes, I feel like a living in a loop especially in last two years. My mood, my emotions and everything seems to me has a Sometimes, I feel like a living in a loop especially in last two years. My mood, my emotions and everything seems to me has a pattern if someone has a great computation power it caltulates everything when I talk about this with other people, I saw two steoretypes may be three first, I don't fucking care about group, second group is said it bother of me if something or any human's great calculation powers in every aspects of life even if cosmos this kind of information power makes you very supreme compared to us, and third ones very like this idea because in core of this means there's nothing without accessible knowledge. I think this kind of people likes orders in their life and that reflected their philosophical ideas. Expect in first group, since in their strategy is there's nothing to analysis may be they already make a decision to this huge question. ''Say what you want this changes nothing as we talk about absolute power of the universe''. Yet, may be we are not because we don't other possibilities may be after all of these calculations and having absolute power, They will ask themselves. ''Okey, we achieved but after many of calculations, why we can do this or how we can do this we have all causality answers but in essence of we have the same level with the people who lived two thousend years ago in Athens''. Like every debats, in this argument there are thousend of different approaches in a political view or pracmatic view etc. But after all conclusions we have a simple questions and from this timeline they seems still valid. May be language is a great dellusion like math we could open a thousend of doors but when it comes to leave out house we found ourselves in the middle of the kitchen. Although we want to go garden. Some questions has a answers not clearly thanks to deffault issues. But may be just individuals near the truths somehow and human's life span can only allow to individuals from the every point of history. if someone has a great computation power it caltulates everything when I talk about this with other people, I saw two steoretypes may be three first, I don't care about group, second group is said it bother of me if something or any human's great calculation powers in every aspects of life even if cosmos this kind of information power makes you very supreme compared to us, and third ones very like this idea because in core of this means there's nothing without accessible knowledge. I think this kind of people likes orders in their life and that reflected their philosophical ideas. Expect in first group, since in their strategy is there's nothing to analysis may be they already make a decision to this huge question. ''Say what you want this changes nothing as we talk about absolute power of the universe''. Yet, may be we are not because we don't other possibilities may be after all of these calculations and having absolute power, They will ask themselves. ''Okey, we achieved but after many of calculations, why we can do this or how we can do this we have all causality answers but in essence of we have the same level with the people who lived two thousend years ago in Athens''. Like every debats, in this argument there are thousend of different approaches in a political view or pracmatic view etc. But after all conclusions we have a simple questions and from this timeline they seems still valid. May be language is a great dellusion like math we could open a thousend of doors but when it comes to leave out house we found ourselves in the middle of the kitchen. Although we want to go garden. Some questions has a answers not clearly thanks to deffault issues. But may be just individuals near the truths somehow and human's life span can only allow to individuals from the every point of history.
Sometimes
, I feel
like
a living in a loop
especially
in last two years. My mood, my emotions and
everything
seems
to me has a
Sometimes
, I feel
like
a living in a loop
especially
in last two years. My mood, my emotions and
everything
seems
to me has a pattern if someone has a
great
computation
power
it
caltulates
everything
when I
talk
about this with
other
people
, I
saw
two
steoretypes
may be three
first
, I
don't
fucking
care about
group
, second
group
is said
it bother of me if something or any
human's
great
calculation
powers
in every
aspects
of
life
even if cosmos this
kind
of information
power
makes
you
very
supreme compared to us, and third ones
very
like
this
idea
because
in core of this means there's
nothing
without accessible knowledge. I
think
this
kind
of
people
likes
orders in their
life
and that reflected their philosophical
ideas
.
Expect
in
first
group
, since in their strategy is there's
nothing
to analysis
may be
they already
make
a decision to this huge
question
. ''Say what you
want
this
changes
nothing
as we
talk
about
absolute
power
of the universe''.
Yet
,
may be
we are not
because
we
don't
other
possibilities may be
after all
of these
calculations
and having
absolute
power
, They will ask themselves. ''
Okey
, we achieved
but
after
many
of
calculations
, why we can do this or how we can do this we have all causality
answers
but
in essence of we have the same level with the
people
who
lived
two
thousend
years ago in Athens''.
Like
every
debats
, in this argument there are
thousend
of
different
approaches in a political
view
or
pracmatic
view
etc.
But
after all
conclusions we have a simple
questions
and from this timeline they
seems
still
valid.

May be language is a
great
dellusion
like
math we could open a
thousend
of doors
but
when it
comes
to
leave
out
house
we found ourselves in the middle of the kitchen.
Although
we
want
to go garden.
Some
questions
has
a
answers
not
clearly
thanks to
deffault
issues.
But
may be
just
individuals
near the truths somehow and
human's
life
span can
only
allow
to
individuals
from the every point of history.
if
someone has a
great
computation
power
it
caltulates
everything
when I
talk
about this with
other
people
, I
saw
two
steoretypes
may be three
first
, I
don't
care about
group
, second
group
is said
it bother of me if something or any
human's
great
calculation
powers
in every
aspects
of
life
even if cosmos this
kind
of information
power
makes
you
very
supreme compared to us, and third ones
very
like
this
idea
because
in core of this means there's
nothing
without accessible knowledge. I
think
this
kind
of
people
likes
orders in their
life
and that reflected their philosophical
ideas
.
Expect
in
first
group
, since in their strategy is there's
nothing
to analysis
may be
they already
make
a decision to this huge
question
. ''Say what you
want
this
changes
nothing
as we
talk
about
absolute
power
of the universe''.
Yet
,
may be
we are not
because
we
don't
other
possibilities may be
after all
of these
calculations
and having
absolute
power
, They will ask themselves. ''
Okey
, we achieved
but
after
many
of
calculations
, why we can do this or how we can do this we have all causality
answers
but
in essence of we have the same level with the
people
who
lived
two
thousend
years ago in Athens''.
Like
every
debats
, in this argument there are
thousend
of
different
approaches in a political
view
or
pracmatic
view
etc.
But
after all
conclusions we have a simple
questions
and from this timeline they
seems
still
valid.

May be language is a
great
dellusion
like
math we could open a
thousend
of doors
but
when it
comes
to
leave
out
house
we found ourselves in the middle of the kitchen.
Although
we
want
to go garden.
Some
questions
has
a
answers
not
clearly
thanks to
deffault
issues.
But
may be
just
individuals
near the truths somehow and
human's
life
span can
only
allow
to
individuals
from the every point of history.
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IELTS essay language and thougts in human nature

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
698 words
5.5
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